Repairing Broken Bridges

[108am]

Fandom: U-KISS
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, Drama
Pairing: Kibum/Kevin
Word Count: 4045
Summary: It was a mutual agreement to separate, but was cutting all ties for the best?

Prompt: 18. Repair

Author's Note: Ok, so Kemaru is not exactly my OTP, but somehow my longest one-shot to date is about these two, so yay for Kemaru fans? :’D

Comments

[mkcv4]

aaww!! dat was sad but cute at da same time... do i even make sense???...hahah anyway it was sad how both kevin and kibum were hurt and more sad knowing da reason was cuz of each other T_T....but it was good they made up at the end...yay!! happy ending!!>.<

love it!!! ^^

[y0naki_x3]

:D It makes sense, don't worry! Thank you for reading! ^_^

[s2_otter]

YES :D
YAY FOR GOOD AUTHOR + MY OTP :D LOVE YOU~~! :DDD!

OMG I HATE YOU T____T
YOU WRITE THE TRUTH, they've drifted apart, my otp :(
It's so fitting right now my heart hurts :(
Everytime I see them not interacting, I really want to just put a camera in their van and see what's happening :(

OMG T____T I JUST HATE YOU. My heart is like breaking and I'm not even halfway done :(
“Did you even hear-what do you mean you’re looking it up online?”
Hyungjoon, you're such a darling /kisses

I love EliXander's mental support. And the bad liars they are :D
Kiseop was really nice too, although he was nearly violated.
Soohyun was the one to knock Kibum awake.
Dongho was just being innocent and some sort of comfort for Kevin. Somehow it seems like Kevin's really fragile to need so many people on his side :)
Cute though :D

“We were suffocating each other, finding faults, putting blames, and even doing stupid things.”

“Like meeting other people behind each other’s back.”
/gasps! NOOOO. T____T

“Are we starting over again?”Nope :) You've never

[s2_otter]

He then looked up when he felt a hand on his cheek, and his whisper was so quiet, it would have been lost had the room not been so hushed. “Did we make a mistake?”

As I was rereading, I found my favourite line.
Gosh this is so beautiful. The fact that they're sitting down, reviewing their relationship and asking about it.
GAHHHHH.

[y0naki_x3]

My heart is like breaking and I'm not even halfway done :(

Mission accomplished. >D jkjk ♥
Heh, HJB ended up being a subtle comedy relief, but it worked, and I'm happy I included him. :3

Somehow it seems like Kevin's really fragile to need so many people on his side :)

He's precious, and precious babies get more moral support. Besides, Kibum gets HJB. um, of course I love Baby so I'm being blatantly biased and illogical rn...this makes sense to me D: /shuts up now .__.

:] I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reading & commenting! ♥

[s2_otter]

HAHA :D That's quite all right :) You mended it (sort of) at the end :D

OH YEAH, I LOVE THAT COMEDY RELIEF GUY :D
I ADD HIM FOR COMEDY RELIEF TOO LOLLLL <33

Yeah :D HAHA. IKR.
Nah it's okay, it makes sense to me :D

I LOVED IT :D
NAHHHH. THANK YOU FOR WRITING :DD

[capturedhear_t]

I hated this when I started reading because of broken!Kemaru.
BUT OMG YAY THEY MADE UP 8D!!
:DDDD
<3

[y0naki_x3]

Aww, well I'm glad you didn't stop reading! :D Thank you for commenting! ^^

[goodbyethankyou]

This was. Beautiful. It's been so long since I've read such a long, awesome one-shot. :) And yes! Yay for Kemaru fans!! :D
I was kinda confused at the beginning cos I didn't really know what was going on. But then I figured out and it was just so heartbreaking....-ly awesome!!! LOL. I love angst. And even though you said Kemaru isn't your OTP, you totally nailed it! :D

This is kinda random, but. When I was reading this part “Maybe we needed this separation. We were suffocating each other, finding faults, putting blames, and even doing stupid things.” “Like meeting other people behind each other’s back.” , 2AM's I Did Wrong started playing on the radio. LOL. What a coincidence. XD Nice fic, good job! :D

[y0naki_x3]

And even though you said Kemaru isn't your OTP, you totally nailed it! :D

I always give my 100%, even if I don't ship a pairing. ;3

This is kinda random, but. When I was reading this part [...], 2AM's I Did Wrong started playing on the radio. LOL. What a coincidence. XD Nice fic, good job! :D

Oh, how fitting! That is such a heartrendingly beautiful song. ♥

Thanks for reading & commenting! :]

[y0naki_x3]

I'm glad you liked it, thank you for reading! ^^