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Temperance Brennan---006.Everybody's Fool

Jan 03, 2007 22:54

Title: The Woman in the Mirror
Fandom: Bones
Characters: Brennan....a mention of Booth...
Prompt: 006. Everybody's Fool
Word Count: 400
Rating: PG/K+
Warnings/Spoilers: Spoilers for The Woman in Limbo...possibly.
Summary: Brennan looks in the mirror and thinks. Set during The Woman in Limbo just before Booth comes by with chinese food for the second time.
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Comments 5

niccuinn January 4 2007, 02:56:13 UTC

I think this is lovely! Its nice to have some introspection from this POV - I dont see it often, and you did quite well!

buffyangellvr23 January 4 2007, 05:00:20 UTC

Nicely done :)

shadesofkate January 4 2007, 05:03:11 UTC

I liked it lots Emm!
This paragraph I loved
A large part of you knows that this woman is whoever you want her to be, and a larger part of you wants-and part of you knows-that she is Temperance Brennan. She is not a lie because she is who you are. But there is always that small confused and vulnerable part of you that wonders if you’re just kidding yourself. That part of you is the part that is so uncertain of who she is and what is going on that you are afraid that your world will crumble underneath your feet. Unfortunately, it’s the part that’s in control.
Brilliant!

misshigherpower January 4 2007, 17:32:06 UTC

Good job!

callieach January 5 2007, 02:06:18 UTC

That made me cry. I hate you for being so good.
Fantastic.