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acidpop25: "Jump. Fall. Die." R

May 26, 2006 21:54

Title: Jump. Fall. Die.
Author: acidpop25
Rating: R
Prompt Set: 100.1
Prompt: #56, "Jump"
Word Count: 244
Summary: "The descent is utter and absolute."
Warnings: Minor character death, suicide.
Notes: Set at Hogwarts during the war. One line shamelessly stolen from "Cloud on my Tongue" by Tori Amos.

( Jump. Fall. Die. )

luna 100.1 (acidpop25)

Comments 5

star_faerie May 27 2006, 14:22:44 UTC

Wow. I liked it. It was thoughrilly confuses yet at the same time it drew me in.

acidpop25 May 27 2006, 14:34:53 UTC

Glad you liked! Though I'm sorry it was confusing...

reverseorder May 29 2006, 12:14:16 UTC

Ooh, alliteration! And the long sentences that make my eyes trip over them in order to read it at the pace I think it should be, indispersed with fragmented ideas... *goes a little cross-eyed*

Compelling. I had to read it three times before I truly appreciated it : )

acidpop25 May 31 2006, 21:24:01 UTC

Ohh, yes, exactly! It's supposed to be chaotic and confusing as she thinks and feels this sort of overload, so that's great to hear, actually :) And I'm really glad you went to the effort to read it deeply; that's very flattering. Thank you!

wilshirist June 23 2006, 10:22:53 UTC

O.

M.

G.

*ded*

I read it aloud. I loveitloveitloveit. Friend me?