[Fanfiction] Echoes, Silence, Patient, Grace {Lost}

[nicis_anatomy]

TITLE: Echoes, Silence, Patient, Grace
SERIES: Family Portrait - Part 11/25
FANDOM: Lost
AUTHOR: nicis_anatomy
CHARACTER: Juliet Carlson/Jack Shephard with two surprise guests
GENRE: het, romance
RATING: PG-13
WORD COUNT: 2,438
SUMMARY: A picnic in the park can be full of surprises ... Written for prompt "Picnic" for schmoop_bingo and prompt #082 "Nature" for 100_tales.

Comments

[lormats]

ok first lol at this: "he felt her tears wetting his cheeks - or were these his own tears? " our good old Jack jearing ;) it cracked me up...

Then it was a great chapter bb, the whole interaction about James and Miles was not too much, not to little, just the needed amount, and well explained... :)
And the rest of the chapter ♥ I can't believe i'm shipping this two...
and this:
It was almost as if his subconscious had already known what would happen today.
Everything happened for a reason and coincidences didn’t exist … Not in his world.

GREAT ♥

[nicis_anatomy]

He, don't make fun of the jears ;)

[lormats]

lol poor Jack... and I though it was wonderful ♥

BTW(we finished the crack fic that was going on at team dharma... and I swear I'm not drunk or anything)

[nicis_anatomy]

;)

I just finished reading it. I'm jearing right now. This story is epic!! I hope we have to write a crack!fic as a team at some point of this phase. Because you two are so good at it ;)

[lormats]

lol TY :) We could make a crack fic post to have fun between challenges ;)