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[Fanfiction ] What we had was only for a while, but it was worth every second

Sep 20, 2010 15:09

TITLE: What we had was only for a while, but it was worth every second
FANDOM: Lost
AUTHOR: nicis_anatomy
 CHARACTER: Jack Shephard/Juliet Carlson, David Shephard
GENRE: het, romance, angst
RATING:  PG-13
WORD COUNT:  1,953
SUMMARY: Although, they weren't meant to last, Jack and Juliet had a great time together. Written for theme set beta for 1sentence.
 WARNING ( Read more... )

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Comments 9

lormats September 20 2010, 14:35:00 UTC

OMG I almost cry with the last ones... if I were David I'd be on mummys side too
cuz she's the prettiest these are greats bb :) (Do you realize i'm shipping them only because of your fic... though I ship them in s3 at the same time I shipped Skate... How messed up was I? lol)

nicis_anatomy September 20 2010, 17:35:35 UTC

Yeah, the last ones ... I wanted to avoid angst, but somehow ... it was there before I could do anything about it ;)
I'm glad you liked it anyway.

But skate?? *shocked* No, this pairing never worked for me. And I guess it's a reason why I didn't really like Sawyer in the earlier seasons :(

lormats September 20 2010, 17:39:14 UTC

yeah *ashamed* I ship James and Kate for a while... but I ship Kate and Jack too... for real I wanted Sawyer for myself...I always love him even when he was an ass...

nighttiming1022 September 20 2010, 17:51:27 UTC

omg I'm jearing with the last five :'( My particular faves were Whimsy, bias, smirk, whiskey and rum, waltz, breaking, blessing, valiant, and quirk Lovely little ficlets :)

nicis_anatomy September 21 2010, 09:19:08 UTC

Oops ... sorry :( Didn't want to make you cry. But I'm also glad it worked that way and that you liked it.
Thank you ;)

pann_cake September 20 2010, 19:50:31 UTC

Hun, these are so great! I've only ever done 1sentence once, because I found it so hard, but you say so much in just one sentence. It's amazing.

I love all the wedding ones, and the baby David ones. I especially love how you portray Jack as trying to be a better father than Christian was to him.

And I like that the reason for the divorce is a little vague and up to the imagination. I loved in the sideways world how they were divorced but still seemed to have a great relationship and friendship. The last one in particular really shows this.

Nice job! :)

nicis_anatomy September 21 2010, 09:17:41 UTC

They are? Really? Oh, thank you ... I'm glad you like them. It was fun writing them and it wasn't even that hard (not like the two sets I wrote before). Strange ...

And regarding the divorce: I think it's really hard to come up with something really bad here, since they still were such good friends in the finale. I am having a really hard time thinking about how their marriage could've ended, so I decided to keep it vague. Glad it worked.

Thank you ;)

seenik September 20 2010, 23:05:39 UTC

I just wanted to say that these were awesome, and that I actually like the "angst" ridden ones the best (especially 'Neutral')...but I have to admit, with my other OTP besides Jack/Juliet being (sorry guys) Sawyer/Kate, I kinda love angst period lol

Really, really good though!

nicis_anatomy September 21 2010, 09:20:41 UTC

Thank you ;) I'm glad you liked and enjoyed them - especially the angst ;)