Challenge #302: Prisoner's Dilemma

Jun 26, 2012 01:23

Love is a prison.

Sanzo had felt that way since he sorted out and hid away his feelings for his master. He didn’t do emotions anymore. With the return of his duties, annoyance and its permutations were the only feelings to touch his calloused heart.

He didn’t have time for anything more.

He thought he was satisfied that way.

The day his hand reached ( Read more... )

challenge 302

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nochick_fics June 26 2012, 07:33:41 UTC
Aw.

(Wait, did I just aw over something I swore never to aw over? ;-)

I liked this very much.

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kirathaune June 26 2012, 13:06:28 UTC
I saw that Aw!!!

*giggles*

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nochick_fics June 26 2012, 17:02:26 UTC
You saw nothing! Nothiiiiiing!!! *runs away*

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genjyosgirl June 26 2012, 14:50:46 UTC
:DD Thank you.

*secretly delighted*

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wongkk June 26 2012, 08:37:24 UTC
This is very good - great idea that Sanzo is the real prisoner and not the "prisoner" that he is releasing. Very nicely done!

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genjyosgirl June 26 2012, 14:51:52 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked it. Makes for quite the "dilemma", right? :)

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kirathaune June 26 2012, 13:07:23 UTC
This was lovely! ♥

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genjyosgirl June 26 2012, 14:52:17 UTC
*blush* Thanks!

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lawless523 June 26 2012, 13:51:00 UTC
Nice combination of character study and a reflection on the re-establishment of a bond with humanity that was broken at Koumyou's death!

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genjyosgirl June 26 2012, 14:54:08 UTC
Thanks so much! Goku has been Sanzo's catalyst in so many ways. I felt this prompt was perfect to express that.

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genjyosgirl June 26 2012, 18:23:10 UTC
Awww! I'm so glad you liked it! :D I don't do much Sanzo and Goku, so I'm glad this one reached you. *hugs*

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