Calm Before the Storm

Apr 16, 2007 15:23

It’s the crest between summer and fall, the sticky time he’s always hated most and the weight of the world presses onto his chest as they fight again. As he lies on the torn bedspread (like the torn seams of a heart), he hates being the cream of their family oreo.

Hate you can’t understand will never

The humid air is heavy as their words, the ( Read more... )

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tigriswolf April 16 2007, 19:32:32 UTC
Your cut didn't work. Pretty lil'ficlet.

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erila April 16 2007, 19:34:22 UTC
Yeah, I'm slightly internet illiterate and working on the cut. ^^

Thank you!

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halfshellvenus April 18 2007, 06:23:02 UTC
the words that barely graze the surface of each other but scrape into his soul
That right there. Yes. *wibble*

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erila April 18 2007, 22:23:10 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!

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