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fic: Word of the Day (1/1)

Jan 29, 2010 01:03

title: The Word of the Day
fandom: Community
pairing: Annie/Jeff
word count: 1,081
rating: hard r
for: The Porn Battle IX; prompt: moonlight
a/n: My very first Annie/Jeff porn!

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tv: community, fic, pairing: annie/jeff

Comments 6

fiddlings June 24 2010, 03:28:48 UTC

...How does this not have any comments?! Well, hmph. I highly enjoyed it. It took a few moments for the steam to clear off of my screen, though. ;D

But really, this was a wonderful little piece. It was super hot without feeling forced and/or porn-y. Not to mention, you used awesome big words like phantasmagoria, which kind of makes me love you a lot.

0penhearts June 24 2010, 04:32:06 UTC

Lol, it's just archived here, since it was originally posted as a comment in the Porn Battle :) But, thank you! I was kinda freaked about writing porn for them because of the tone of the show and everything, but I ended up really loving the process of writing it :)

Big words make me happy :) Well-chosen ones that is, lol.

fiddlings June 24 2010, 04:50:15 UTC

Ahh, okay. That makes more sense. I am now suffering much less indignation on your behalf.

Big words make me happy :) Well-chosen ones that is, lol.

Agreed. :)

redbrunja August 6 2010, 12:48:19 UTC

VERY HOT.

(What Jeff converts in his brain as uneasiness on her behalf at the awkwardness that could ensue after this insane night quickly rights itself into its real form: Jeff is fucking terrified that something he didn't mean to let happen could boil over into one of those horrible experiences all women seem to have that become a massive piece of baggage to carry around forever after. He's never understood how that happens, just that it does sometimes, and when it does, it's kind of soul-sucking to observe from the outside. This is why he avoids that whole emotional phantasmagoria to begin with. He doesn't do that level of responsibility.)

I really like this paragraph.

0penhearts August 12 2010, 02:37:01 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it ;)

wallows October 8 2010, 15:47:52 UTC

"Annie Edison has out-raunched Jeff Winger."
Oh this is definitely how I knew it would go...

Incredibly hot. Whew. And subtle, too, which is not a word I often say about the pron : ) And just nicely calibrated. You capture these little cues that don't make it interchangeable with another pairing, as it can often be. It's also quite sweet.