Romantic Academic
Title: Romantic Academic
Rating:PG-13
Genre: Romance, Angst.
Pairing: 2min
Wordcount: 555
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summary: He is but a distraction to him; yet now as things are returning to how they were, why does he feel nothing but regret? For challenge 007 @ shawol_haven
( “I’ve always been and will always be proud of you, Taemin.” )
Rating:PG-13
Genre: Romance, Angst.
Pairing: 2min
Wordcount: 555
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summary: He is but a distraction to him; yet now as things are returning to how they were, why does he feel nothing but regret? For challenge 007 @ shawol_haven
( “I’ve always been and will always be proud of you, Taemin.” )
I LOVE hs!au but I've never really been a fan of teacher/student relationships but for some reasons I couldn't stop reading this, neither was I disgusted with their relationship. It felt honest and sincere and nothing alike the lust-driven intentions that usually fill these relationships.
It was pretty hot at first, with Minho being all ~toppy (squirms).
And then they started talking mock-casually and my heart just started cracking.
And then Taemin started breaking down.
“I know I know. You can’t be a romantic academic. You’re too practical and mature and responsible to be one anyway.”
:'l
“And…I-I’m going… to be the best… best s-student ever when the new school term s-starts. I’m going to make you proud of me, Minho.”
MY FFFFFFFFFFFFFFRICKKKKIN' HEART. SOBS. ;______;
oh god, I want to gather Taemin into my arms and hug him and find yuri another boyfriend or something so they can be together. dkfjbhtekjgbkjethgkjethgkbjetgbkjtb I feel so emotionally conflicted right now. gdi.
WTGF, I HATE THEIR SITUATION. THIS IS FICTION BUT IT'S MAKING ME SFKJGETKJHGKJEHGJTGB.
urrrrrrrrrrrrgh. I really liked this. I love your dialogue, it flows well, it's natural, it's not forced, it's interesting to read and in character. Parts of the dialogue meant to be bittersweet, it conveyed that, and it shows people their situation more than tell people about it.
Like, "OH HELLO, I HAVE A WIFE", you revealed it naturally, in flow and it was enjoyable to read. Good dialogue seems difficult for most people, including myself (althoughI'mnotbodyreally), and I admire how you pull it off well. :)
Usually, I don't read fics posted @shawol_haven, and I've begun to stop reading fics altogether even though I really love reading fics - something about most fics don't catch my attention long enough, so I'm really happy to have given this fic a shot.
To me it is a gem, and I don't care what anyone else says or what anyone else thinks, I feel that you should continue writing and I've never voted for anyone before but I can't help it. I must vote for this fic. This is such an enjoyable read you don't even know, and it's making me want to read fics again. Thank you so very much. ♥ /god I talk so much.
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i love your comment so much okay dear! *hugs comment tightly* i'm a fan of your work (i think i commented on the long epic one before) so i'm very very happy you like my writing :D
in general... i don't like teacher-student relationships either mainly because i can't/don't write smut but this just materialized in my head suddenly- right from the bit where minho slams taemin into the wall. but the more i wrote, it steadily decided it wanted to be angsty.
dialogue is something i'm always unsure of. i love it; but i'm always afraid it's pointless, so to hear you say otherwise makes me :D
and thank you very much once again for the comment; it really means so much to me. you made my day ♥
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