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Tearless

Dec 29, 2010 15:48

Title: Tearless

Rating: PG

Genre: Romance, drama

Pairing: Onkey, implied 2min

Word count: 1654

Disclaimer: Do not own.

Summary: Key owns a special restaurant; a place where people treat their heartbreaks and sadness. He listens to them and cooks for them and the people tend to leave completely refreshed and with a new enthusiasm for life.

( The moment Jinki said it, the remainder of whatever that plagued him seemed to dissipate and he felt light once again. )

r:pg, p:onkey, p:2min, shinee, g:romance

Comments 7

elfrulezforever December 29 2010, 11:28:11 UTC

Okay this is so mysterious...

0n3star December 29 2010, 16:25:13 UTC

hahaha. thanks for reading anyway!

volatileflame December 29 2010, 16:54:45 UTC

this was absolutely lovely <3

0n3star December 29 2010, 17:35:10 UTC

:D thanks for reading and commenting!

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0n3star December 29 2010, 17:36:34 UTC

hahah, no offence taken! i sort of have no idea what i was even writing |: but i'm glad you liked anyway! thanks for reading~

rinni1905 December 30 2010, 05:28:59 UTC

The idea is really unique and well, I must say that your writing is seriously good too. That's why the whole "heartbreak and sadness curing restaurant" appeared so interesting. I like your ending, even though I'm kind of curious what will happen after the awkward and mysterious OnKey meeting.

I just hope to have the same restaurant in the real life too, and with 5 handsome boys serving me like that. Keke, this would be a mixture of 'Ouran high school host club' and 'xxxHolic', don't you think? The fic is really good, and I hope you could continue to write more. Thanks for sharing this!

0n3star December 30 2010, 07:03:44 UTC

oh, i'm so glad you like it :DDD cos it's a bit strange even to myself. so thank you very much for reading and commenting!