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"....and in every essence, he was beautiful. Not like you think of a person as beautiful, but like you'd think of a Tiger or some other ferocious animal. For that's what he was, an animal, a fierce beast. He was unhuman to the core, a mixed up jumble of creature that thirsted for vengeance. A feral critter of darkness unafraid to get blood on his hands."
i wrote that about Michael
i've decided to base the main character of my book on Michael
and i'm going to reuse that passage somewhere in the book
so anyways his name is Michael (sorry Britt, had to throw Karl out the window)
in full:
Sergeant Michael Sangue
a 19 year old boy recruited into a mission of sure death
but he's kinda messed up, kinda crazy "a feral critter of darkness"
this is either going to be really good, or it's going to suck
i also thought about in the end not having anyone achieving the ultimate goal and dying, but then i didnt know if that would make the book sucky or not.
suggestions?????
i wrote that about Michael
i've decided to base the main character of my book on Michael
and i'm going to reuse that passage somewhere in the book
so anyways his name is Michael (sorry Britt, had to throw Karl out the window)
in full:
Sergeant Michael Sangue
a 19 year old boy recruited into a mission of sure death
but he's kinda messed up, kinda crazy "a feral critter of darkness"
this is either going to be really good, or it's going to suck
i also thought about in the end not having anyone achieving the ultimate goal and dying, but then i didnt know if that would make the book sucky or not.
suggestions?????