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Soul's Requiem (Deleted Smut Scene)

Apr 21, 2009 03:27

Comments 8

jinsane226 May 11 2009, 05:53:24 UTC

Oh the love they both have for each other. In a sense I can see why you deleted it, it somewhat takes away from the story a bit but, it is refreshing to read a sex scene with Jae that he has given his consent in.

xxelinaxx January 10 2010, 00:58:32 UTC

HOT xD
I kind of understand why you deleted this scene. I guess if the fic was longer you could have kept it.. But the way you ended the story it wouldn't have fit so well if in one chapter they had sex and in the other yunho came back. xD So yeah... but thanks for sharing this anyway~ ^_^ I loved their relationship. Weird but lovely. ♥ ♥ ♥

xxelinaxx January 10 2010, 01:09:02 UTC

Oh my fault.. I just realized this scene was from another part of the story o_O
Wow then i'd have kept it :P haha

marieluna February 11 2010, 09:34:11 UTC

Oh... sure it is different this Jae from the one in Shattered Love (I've just read that) Mhm... now I need to find Soul's Requiem

toni_luv March 13 2010, 08:21:33 UTC

when did you add this part? *scratches head* crap hell I re-read this whole story again. :P

yjjyluv October 24 2015, 20:43:24 UTC

I'm sorry it should have stayed deleted I love yunjae too much. Hate hate jaemin and jaejoong sound so slutty and needy here

Yunho shouldn't have come back
And your Soul's requiem sound more like a jaejoong/oc and jaemin then yunjae